Monday, March 14, 2011

03/14/11

Victor:  My essay took a more of a pathos filled approach followed by statistics pulled out of then essay, I think my approach was an efficient way to illustrate the point the author tries to make because the contrast between the pathos and logos, makes it flow smoothly.

Cesar:
Compared to the essay we reviewed in class, my essay had more personal opinions and examples that completed most of the writing, examples were pulled out of the essay to strengthen my opinion.

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